Oct. 20, 2020
College-bound high school seniors, have you decided which application(s) you'll be using? There are a number from which to choose, depending on your college choices and application strategy.
For an excellent overview of application possibilities, check out this helpful article: Understanding the Different Types of College Applications. There you'll find explanations of "the Common Application; the Universal Application; Individual College Applications; the Coalition for Access, Affordability, and Success Application; and A Shared Application for a System of Colleges."
I want to discuss the popular "essay of your choice" option that appears on many of these applications. For example, here are the "your choice" prompts from four different types of applications:
Share an essay on any topic of your choice. It can be one you've already written, one that responds to a different prompt, or one of your own design.
Universal College Application
Please write an essay that demonstrates your ability to develop and communicate your thoughts. Some ideas include: a person you admire; a life-changing experience; or your viewpoint on a particular current event.
Submit an essay on a topic of your choice.
Individual college applications
Using the University of Chicago as an example [my bold emphasis]:
Essay Option 7: In the spirit of adventurous inquiry (and with the encouragement of one of our current students!) choose one of our past prompts (or create a question of your own). Be original, creative, thought provoking. Draw on your best qualities as a writer, thinker, visionary, social critic, sage, citizen of the world, or future citizen of the University of Chicago; take a little risk, and have fun!
The door is wide open with these prompts. If, after reading through the other application prompts, nothing else inspires you, I urge you to use your own imagination and creativity to fashion a truly outstanding statement.
Your next question may be: How can I do that? Maybe I can help.
Let's talk about attention-grabbing opening sentences. Put your best efforts there! Are you familiar with the term "lede"? As defined, a lede is "The introductory section of a news story that is intended to entice the reader to read the full story." Incidentally, the spelling of lede is allegedly done that way so as not to confuse it with lead (/led/), which refers to the strip of metal that at one time separated lines of type in former printing processes.
How does that apply to your essay? Like this: "The first sentence of your essay should inspire admission officers to read your full statement."
The titles of my blog posts serve as a kind of lede. I try to make them interesting to inspire you to read the rest of what I have written. The same applies to application essays. A strong lede can draw your admission committee readers into your essay. Let me give you a real-life example from one of my former client's experiences.
Aiden [not his real name] was applying to the University of Pennsylvania. He was searching for an idea in response to Penn's famous (now discontinued) "Page 217" essay question: "You have just completed your 300-page autobiography. Please submit page 217." (If you're curious about why this unique prompt was discontinued, see the three reasons here.)
In discussing what he wanted to write about, I thought Aiden had hit upon a perfect topic. He told me that he was on a Little League team for four years and, in all that time, thanks to his coach, he never got into a single game. Not for one inning. Zero at bats. He never took the field, all four seasons.
I immediately knew that this was a winning idea, so I coached Aiden about the value of the lede. Here, from my notes, are some of the many variations we explored for that all-important first sentence:
All this experimenting may seem excessive, extreme or even obsessive. However, try to imagine the hundreds of essays admission officers read during a typical admissions cycle. How many times would a Penn committee member see a Page 217 essay begin with: "In my autobiography, Page 217 would begin by explaining …" — followed by the sound of the reader's head hitting the desk, sound asleep. Thus, the importance of your essay's opening can't be overestimated.
Aiden finally decided on this opening, which, interestingly, implied that his Page 217 began in mid-sentence, as in a real book:
going through an old shoe box of keepsakes, I found this unsent postcard that simply said:
Dear Coach Edminston,
This comment is years overdue. Thanks for never letting me play in any games.
The essay went on to discuss how being a benchwarmer for all those years taught Aiden patience, which allowed him to accomplish a number of challenging goals in his young life. I thought it was a unique and completely captivating statement. By the way, Aiden got into Penn.
Now that you know about the power of the lede, let's stimulate your thinking about topics for that essay "of your own design." Getting back to the University of Chicago, the full list of prompts should kick you into creative overdrive. Don't use these prompts verbatim, obviously, but let them expand your thinking. Allow them to create your own fresh, original topic and approach. Here are three of the seven:
Essay Option 3 — The seven liberal arts in antiquity consisted of the Quadrivium — astronomy, mathematics, geometry, and music — and the Trivium — rhetoric, grammar, and logic. Describe your own take on the Quadrivium or the Trivium. What do you think is essential for everyone to know?
— Inspired by Peter Wang, Class of 2022
Essay Option 4 — Subway maps, evolutionary trees, Lewis diagrams. Each of these schematics tells the relationships and stories of their component parts. Reimagine a map, diagram, or chart. If your work is largely or exclusively visual, please include a cartographer's key of at least 300 words to help us best understand your creation.
— Inspired by Maximilian Site, Class of 2020
Essay Option 5 [My favorite] — "Do you feel lucky? Well, do ya, punk?" - Eleanor Roosevelt. Misattribute a famous quote and explore the implications of doing so.
— Inspired by Chris Davey, AB'13
Here are a several older ones for inspiration:
Use the "essay of your choice" to highlight your originality and creativity. Show your colleges who you are and how you think. That's what they want to know!
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