Combine this sentence.....





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By MIKE THANKS ANYONE WHO RESPONDS.. I APPRECIATE IT!! on Monday, February 03, 2003 - 04:32 pm: Edit

how can i combine these two sentences to make one brief but comprehensive sentence in one???

If admitted, i would look forward to tutuoring students of all skill levels after school.

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[I would, in effect, be playing the role of a “big brother” as I would encourage and teach at the same time. The chance to aid an individual and guide them past their quandary would leave me completely satisfied.]

By asdf on Monday, February 03, 2003 - 04:40 pm: Edit

you need to say "his" after past, not their.

By Quarky (Quarky) on Monday, February 03, 2003 - 05:03 pm: Edit

Ehh..

I would use the opportunity to aid an individual and guide him past his quandary by playing the role of a "big brother," as I would encourage and teach at the same time.

That's what *I* would do, but I suck, so do not listen to me.

By adcs on Monday, February 03, 2003 - 05:46 pm: Edit

If admitted, I would look forward to the satisfying opportunity of serving as a mentor to students by teaching, encouraging, and guiding them past their quandries.


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