|By MIKE THANKS ANYONE WHO RESPONDS.. I APPRECIATE IT!! on Monday, February 03, 2003 - 04:32 pm: Edit|
how can i combine these two sentences to make one brief but comprehensive sentence in one???
If admitted, i would look forward to tutuoring students of all skill levels after school.
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[I would, in effect, be playing the role of a “big brother” as I would encourage and teach at the same time. The chance to aid an individual and guide them past their quandary would leave me completely satisfied.]
|By asdf on Monday, February 03, 2003 - 04:40 pm: Edit|
you need to say "his" after past, not their.
|By Quarky (Quarky) on Monday, February 03, 2003 - 05:03 pm: Edit|
I would use the opportunity to aid an individual and guide him past his quandary by playing the role of a "big brother," as I would encourage and teach at the same time.
That's what *I* would do, but I suck, so do not listen to me.
|By adcs on Monday, February 03, 2003 - 05:46 pm: Edit|
If admitted, I would look forward to the satisfying opportunity of serving as a mentor to students by teaching, encouraging, and guiding them past their quandries.
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