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I'm currently in the hectic phase of trying to finish my early college application. My parents aren't very good at English and aren't familiar with the college application, so I haven't received any comments from an adult's point of view.

So, would anyone be kind enough to read and comment on (/possibly edit) my essay? Send me an email (my profile) and I'll send it to your immediately. Thanks in advance.