| By Dallasasian (Dallasasian) on Saturday, September 11, 2004 - 12:48 pm: Edit |
I have to write an essay for a college scholarship and I am having trouble with it. My essay promt is With your future growth in mind describe a potential classmate that you believe you could learn from either within or outside a formal classroom environment.
I just started my rough draft, but I noticed that I have a LOT of the phrase "I hope that I will learn..." or ones to that effect. Any advice on how to change that? And is there another way to describe the classmate instead of saying " my future classmate..."
thanks.
ps. I hate writing in future tense.
| By Jpeng (Jpeng) on Tuesday, September 14, 2004 - 11:29 pm: Edit |
Make it a story...like you're writing it from the future. Or to make it clearer, date your essay like you would a journal entry, then make up what happened and reflect on it.
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