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Here's the first part of my personal statement:

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By Ndbisme2 (Ndbisme2) on Friday, January 02, 2004 - 12:27 pm: Edit

By Xdtish (Xdtish) on Friday, January 02, 2004 - 12:33 pm: Edit

So far so good. Post the rest later.

:-)

By Vtsonev (Vtsonev) on Friday, January 02, 2004 - 12:36 pm: Edit

isn't "inexplicable" the correct word you should use, not "unexplainable"?

By Muzicgal04 (Muzicgal04) on Friday, January 02, 2004 - 12:36 pm: Edit

confused....if you're waiting for the light to turn green, and you start crossing when the light is green....?
have no idea where you're going with this, so its hard to critique

By Ndbisme2 (Ndbisme2) on Friday, January 02, 2004 - 12:37 pm: Edit

Nice. You're right!
Anything that else that jumps out?

By Ndbisme2 (Ndbisme2) on Friday, January 02, 2004 - 12:38 pm: Edit

I'm trying to write about a risk that changed my perspective on life.

By Vtsonev (Vtsonev) on Friday, January 02, 2004 - 12:40 pm: Edit

what about inexplicable? am I right?

By Vtsonev (Vtsonev) on Friday, January 02, 2004 - 12:42 pm: Edit

I would also use "hard", "exhausting" or "strenuous" day even instead of "rough day".

By Ndbisme2 (Ndbisme2) on Friday, January 02, 2004 - 01:28 pm: Edit

right on x2 vtsonev

By Daggerlee (Daggerlee) on Friday, January 02, 2004 - 01:32 pm: Edit

unexplainable is fine. "rough" is fine too, in my opinion. Don't try to dress it up in big words...