Showing VS Telling

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Discus: College Admissions: 2002 - 2003 Archive: November 2003 Archive: Showing VS Telling
By Thecritic22 (Thecritic22) on Thursday, November 06, 2003 - 04:57 am: Edit

I spent a few hours rewriting my essay for the common ap (a freewrite), but I'm afraid it's ALL telling and no showing. Would anyone be willing to take a look? It's 500 words long and about my experience in "West Side Story". I'm a little paranoid about putting it up on the boards, but i'll e-mail it to anyone that's interested. Thank you so much! Adults especially would be wonderful.

By Thecritic22 (Thecritic22) on Friday, November 07, 2003 - 06:29 pm: Edit


By Vtsonev (Vtsonev) on Saturday, November 08, 2003 - 06:52 pm: Edit

I would like. mail me at venko(at)vip dot bg

By Noshiksagoddess (Noshiksagoddess) on Saturday, November 08, 2003 - 06:55 pm: Edit

I'd be willing to read. My email's in my profile.

By Bdiddy (Bdiddy) on Saturday, November 08, 2003 - 09:41 pm: Edit

What is it like in America. You can shine shoes in America. (Love that song)

By Fiza (Fiza) on Tuesday, November 11, 2003 - 12:02 am: Edit

emails in profile. Also, could u edit mine?

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