Essay topic : moving

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By Amicus (Amicus) on Friday, July 25, 2003 - 10:20 am: Edit

I know it may not be a unque essay topic, but I wanted to write an essay about my move in my junior year from a top, competitive college prepartory school in the heart of Boston, to a "not so academic" inner city school in southern FL. In the essay I wanted to highlight how in my previous school I was focused solely on academics, and had a sheltered life, and how I was resentful to the move, yet how my character developed and I matured greatly in Florida because I became involved in creating programs to create health and education awareness and better the community.

Ok i know I wrote some run-on sentences here, but I'm in a hurry and have to go to work, so tell me what you think about this essay topic. If you can help me out, I was planning to post my resume later to get feedback. Thanks! :)

By Supernova (Supernova) on Sunday, July 27, 2003 - 03:13 pm: Edit

i like it a lot i think the topic has a lot of potential

By Clickspring (Clickspring) on Sunday, July 27, 2003 - 04:15 pm: Edit

Sounds like it'll be a nice essay

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